Exemplars (A Kid Called John)

Exemplars (A Kid Called John)
James has already responded to prompts in the "conversation with the teacher" about giving examples. The next section is about prompts to move the writing to the next level. The second page is an inherent list of criteria for success.
Overall this is a good example of thinking through feedback on writing and then adding guidance.
Also found here:
https://assessment.tki.org.nz/content/download/4807/43345/file/A+Kid+Called+John.pdf
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Reference
TST7
Skillful Teaching